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PC Customization Critiques

Post by Banzai on Sat Jul 10, 2010 2:33 pm

Post here sigs, WP's, banners, any computer graphic for a critique on it.

Only constructive criticism will be given.
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Post by MarkyDMan on Sat Jul 10, 2010 2:34 pm

Here you go, Banzai Smile


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Post by Banzai on Sat Jul 10, 2010 2:41 pm

Very good sig MDM. Though I do believe that rather than behind him, the lighting should come from above, creating the shadows of his arms that are on his shoulders. Text is very well placed, and the font fits the signature very well. The only other thing about the sig I don't really like is the flow. Everything seems to aim toward his chest, while the focal point is at his nose. Try following the direction of his arms and body up toward his head. To help that, flip the scan lines on both sides vertically so that they point up rather than down. Overall one of your best.
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Post by MarkyDMan on Sat Jul 10, 2010 2:42 pm

Thanks Banz, and a very helpful review! I can see you being a respected Critic on here!

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Post by Banzai on Sat Jul 10, 2010 4:29 pm

No problem. And thanks!
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Re: PC Customization Critiques

Post by MarkyDMan on Sat Jul 17, 2010 9:33 am

Here's another for you Smile

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Re: PC Customization Critiques

Post by Banzai on Sat Jul 17, 2010 9:35 am

Could you post a link instead? Half of it is cut off.
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Post by MarkyDMan on Sat Jul 17, 2010 9:35 am

http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2010/197/9/9/ACX_Muscle_Car_wallpaper_by_MarkyDMan.png

Sorry about that Smile

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Post by Banzai on Sat Jul 17, 2010 9:38 am

Don't worry about it! Critique coming...
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Post by Banzai on Sat Jul 17, 2010 9:42 am

Very nice WP! I wouldn't worry so much about the blending, it looks more like a showcase of the car, so you want it to stand out, like it is. Very good lighting and c4d placement. I'm really diggin the smudging you have too. The only thing I don't really like is how the c4d's look pixellated. But the text is very good! Not much to fix here MarkyD
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Re: PC Customization Critiques

Post by MarkyDMan on Sat Jul 17, 2010 9:48 am

WOOHOO!
Well, as I'm bored, have another one!

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Re: PC Customization Critiques

Post by Galox on Sat Jul 17, 2010 10:25 am



And I made that with it Razz
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Post by Galox on Sat Jul 17, 2010 10:25 am

Oops, not only wrong topic, WRONG FORUM!
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Re: PC Customization Critiques

Post by Banzai on Sat Jul 17, 2010 11:50 am

MarkyDMan wrote:WOOHOO!
Well, as I'm bored, have another one!

Nice one Marky! Definitely one of your best. Great smudging. It's blended fairly well, but could use a bit more. As for lighting, It's a bit overpowered. Try burning the shoulder a bit. Flow is great, it's very easy to follow. Text and placement are perfect in my opinion. You improve very quickly! Keep it up!
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Post by MarkyDMan on Sat Jul 17, 2010 11:52 am

KK, thanks Banz Smile You tips are REALLY helping me improve Very Happy

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Post by Banzai on Sat Jul 17, 2010 11:55 am

MarkyDMan wrote:KK, thanks Banz Smile You tips are REALLY helping me improve Very Happy
Funny thing is, I can tell other people what can help, yet can't do it myself
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Re: PC Customization Critiques

Post by Thobe on Sat Jul 17, 2010 3:20 pm

lol
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Re: PC Customization Critiques

Post by ghostofillusion on Wed Jul 21, 2010 4:53 pm

Critique this:



Please. Smile

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